Chapter 209 First Round of Reviews

"Thank you, teacher." Qin Jue took the lead in bowing.

"A very interesting character." Zhu Zishu smiled faintly, "Needless to mention the twists and turns in the plot, I would like to highlight three points."

"First of all, the clerk played by Qin Jue is so busy that he forgets about the engagement, but he still loves the girl at the front desk deeply. This sense of surprise that 'I forgot about other things but never forgot to love you' is very touching. This is the original text of "Busy" The best part of "The Agent's Romance", your adaptation captures the core content, which is good.

"Secondly, from the conversation between Liang Chenglei and Li Zhi, we can find that it was Shu Mei who was concerned about the "no office romance" regulations and took the initiative to retreat in love and submitted her resignation to her boss.

"Finally, Mr. Liang, who stipulates that love is prohibited, is not as strict as he appears. He affirmed the strength of the staff and the front desk. After seeing the resignation, he took the initiative to recommend Shu Mei, an outstanding employee, to his old friend's company. This It is the plot that is not in the original text that makes Liang Chenglei’s character become more three-dimensional.”

Zhu Zishu said with a smile: "Your group has many advantages. What I like most is the allocation and setting of the roles. The four actors, even Li Zhi, who is responsible for promoting the plot, have fleshed out the characters in the details. The one who looks back It’s nice to see the happy smiles of a couple in love.”

He said seriously, "The relationship between the protagonist and the supporting role is of course red flowers and green leaves. But this does not mean that the supporting role should be belittled indefinitely to bring out the excellence of the protagonist. I think this is what many people need to learn."

Those in the audience who reacted quickly laughed out loud, which was obviously a mockery of the tenth group competing for the scene.

"94 points." Zhu Zishu said with a smile, "Every actor has his bright spots."

"Let me talk about my acting skills." Best Actress Ruan Ziyan showed her hand with a score of 96 and smiled, "The leading actor accounted for at least 50% of this performance's acting skills."

There was an uproar on and off the stage.

"What do you mean by Teacher Ruan?" Lin Yuqin complimented him at the right moment.

"He brought Shu Mei into the play. It wasn't obvious at first, but it was especially obvious when the two of them were playing opposite each other. He helped Shu Mei fully immerse herself in the role. I think the script didn't require a crying scene when expressing love. Bar?"

When asked, Shu Mei had tears in her eyes and nodded with a smile.

This means admitting that he couldn't help crying after being brought into the drama.

"In addition, there are two aspects of Qin Jue's performance that can be seen by non-professionals as outstanding." Ruan Ziyan said softly, "The precise, fast and natural movements when time accelerates, and the long paragraph of the final confession." The lines are clearly articulated, and there is still room for deliberate ambiguity. The sentence breaks, pauses, and intonation are all very good. You must have practiced it specially?"

Qin Jue thought of the old man, and his smile became more nostalgic and intimate: "Yes, I was honored to be directed by the director alone when filming."

"It's been a long time since I've seen an actor with such a good command of lines." Yue Yang is a smiling tiger. "The original voice is what it should be, but it's not an 'advantage'. Xiao Qin, keep it up."

Qin Jue responded obediently, and there was no fault in his attitude.

"I give it 90 points." Yue Yang said, "There are some flaws, such as the position of the engagement ring. You should have used the 'male left and female right' setting, right?"

Normally, in order not to hinder daily activities and to comply with international conventions, the engagement ring is worn on the left hand. This is a small mistake. It can be seen that it was intentionally designed for the final close-up.

After Qin Jue and Shu Mei nodded, Yue Yang added: "Actually, you can add more settings. For example, Shu Mei is left-handed, so it makes more sense to wear the ring on the right hand."

Qin Jue's eyes lit up slightly.

"I understand, thank you teacher for your guidance."

Yue Yang was right. When answering calls or recording at the front desk, Shu Mei could hint at this through performance. It is not difficult to add one more small detail that can make the plot smoother and more natural. As long as she can perform it, it will be fine. question.

"I just fast forwarded and watched the backstage video." Zeng Xinhuiqin, who was silent when others were commenting, suddenly said, "Did you write the script?"

"No, I came up with the idea of ​​adapting it, and everyone came up with the lines together." Qin Jue's expression was sincere, "The words I thought of are easier to remember."

"You are the designer of the movements." Zeng Xinhuiqin added.

"Yes." Qin Jue nodded.

"I will give you a choice now." Zeng Xinhuiqin raised her chin slightly with a dignified and strong smile. "In the personal rating, I have decided to give an extra twenty points to a certain member of your group. Who do you choose?"

The explosion is coming!

Lin Yuqin immediately answered: "What our teacher Zeng said is very interesting. Maybe the program team will consider this novel extra point rule. Does this mean that Qin Jue will choose who to give extra points to?"

Zeng Xinhuiqin tapped her chin.

"Who do you think has made the greatest contribution in the entire team?"

"Zhu Xi."

Qin Jue replied instantly.

Props master Zhu Xi, who was standing two people away on the stage, was stunned for two seconds. He didn't expect Qin Jue to call his name.

"Oh? Why?" Zeng Xinhuiqin raised her eyes.

"We have a very short preparation time, so we can only divide it into two parts and do it at the same time." Qin Jue is clear and organized, "The actors, makeup, and recording are all working together to move the characters and lines, and the props are used to set the scene."

"The accelerated performance starting from the second minute was the most difficult for me to perform."

She made no secret and was very calm, "It's Zhu Xi's credit for being able to complete that performance."

"He drew a sketch of the office during the early stage of the discussion. After I gave my suggestions, he revised it twice. The final appearance of the real scene was no different from the style drawing, including the spacing between objects, which helped me save a lot of money. The time for personal experimentation frees up more time for rehearsals, which is crucial to the entire performance.”

Qin Jue said seriously: "Five minutes of preliminary discussion, thirty minutes of plot and scenery, ten minutes of makeup, and fifteen minutes of rehearsal."

"You only rehearsed the seven-minute short play twice?" Yue Yang was surprised.

Such a precise movement was only done twice? !

I wouldn’t even dare to shoot a movie like this!

"Yes." Qin Jue nodded heavily, "To sum up, I choose Zhu Xi. He is a rigorous and responsible props master. Please ask Teacher Zeng to give him extra points - well, if he is willing."

She looked at Zhu Xi and smiled.

Zeng Xinhuiqin always kept smiling, and now her smile became even stronger: "Okay, prop master Zhu Xi, are you willing?"

"Thank you for your affirmation." Zhu Xi breathed a long sigh of relief, gave Qin Jue a happy and touching smile, then turned his head and bowed, "Thank you, Teacher Zeng Xin Huiqin!"

Everything Qin Jue said was correct, and Zhu Xi accepted the extra points with a clear conscience.

But he really didn't expect that Qin Jue would pay attention to his efforts alone.

"This kid." Zhu Zishu turned off his microphone and chatted with Yue Yang. "At first glance, he is a very good leader."

But he is humble, does not take credit, is capable, charming, pays attention to the overall situation, and does not ignore individuals at the same time. He is truly a natural leader.

Those words were sincere, honest, and well-founded, and they seemed to be the truth as soon as they were heard. If it had been anyone else, he might have chosen himself, he might have spoken with high-sounding words and gone along with the favor.

After the review, the total scores and individual scores were sorted out and hung high on the screen on the side of the stage.

The eighth group, "A Day of Overtime", has a total score of 93.75, with a public score of 86, and an additional 17.2 points based on 20%, for a total of 110.95 points, rounded to 111 points, ranking first.

Among them, Zhu Xi’s personal score was 95, and Qin Jue’s personal score was 97, occupying the first place in the props and actors categories respectively.

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