Chapter 530 It's Normal to Have Dog Sledding in Hokkaido

Tetsuya Shimomura's face changed. This editor who climbed from editorial assistant to editor-in-chief step by step, from passively eating cakes to being accustomed to helping his subordinates draw cakes for the author, did not feel at all that he was experiencing a new kind of CPU.

After all, although it actually had the effect of a PUA, there was not a single sentence in Hojo Kyosuke's mouth where he blamed the other party. The whole article was looking for excuses for the other party's mistakes, as if the mistake made by editor Shimomura was necessary to lead to a better world. By making a mistake, he was contributing to the common cause of both parties.

In a word - you made a mistake...but it doesn't matter, I don't blame you.

Seeing Editor-in-Chief Shimomura slapping himself, Hojo Kyosuke's eyes widened slightly. God is my witness, although he wanted Mr. Shimomura to remember this favor, he never thought it would have such a good effect. He has never understood anything about CPU or PUA, and he has always treated people sincerely.

And what he said to Editor Shimomura was indeed from his heart. After all, he had figured out from the beginning that he couldn't pass the blame to the other party. After all... the editor would always feel lonely if he, the author, could not find himself to speak to. It’s understandable that you can’t help but want to talk to other people, huh… haha…

Snapped--

A crisp sound pulled Hojo Kyosuke out of his deep thoughts.

Nice slap, Editor Shimomura! The movements are clean and neat, and the voice is clear and powerful. Without ten years of apology experience, I would never be able to slap such an excellent person. I believe that no matter what mistakes I make, I will be forgiven!

Hojo Kyousuke used his scanning eye to firmly write Shimomura Tetsuya's perfect slap into the hard drive of his brain. He had a hunch that he might also be able to use this trick one day.

Seeing that Shimomura was about to use the level-up skill "Continuous Slap", Hojo Kyousuke quickly grabbed the opponent's hand.

"That's enough! Are you trying to trap me into injustice, Editor Shimomura! If you want to continue, then I can only accompany you!"

As he spoke, he also raised his hand, as if he wanted to do it for himself.

scare!

As soon as he saw this move, Shimomura Tetsuya was immediately startled. He slapped his old face. Anyway, he was already very fat. Even if it was swollen, it wouldn't be visible, but Mr. Hojo's face still needs to be used. Those who do advertising must not be beaten!

So now it was up to him to hold Hojo Kyosuke’s hand. This is why the history of the Neon Warring States Period is mostly the story of the emperor and his subjects Fengle (bottom and top). Otherwise, I am afraid that it will immediately think of a story about falling asleep with enough content and the Duke of Zhou vomiting food. Come on.

But I can’t say for sure, after all, Neon people really like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and there are countless adapted comics and books. Maybe Shimomura Tetsuya himself was responsible for the related cartoonists.

No, Hojo Kyousuke keenly noticed that there was something different in the old man's eyes.

Oops, the performance of this CPU is too good, right?

After being startled, he quickly let go of his hand, leaned back and sat back on the sofa, picked up his briefcase and placed it on the coffee table between the two of them.

"Shimomura, let's take a look at this first." He pulled out a thick stack of printing paper.

"This is……"

Editor Shimomura picked up the manuscript with a sigh, and the words "Detective Conan" were clearly written on the cover. It was the mystery comic he had been thinking about for a long time.

"Didn't you even finish the character designs before? Why did you suddenly draw so many?"

He wondered, although when he communicated with Hojo Kyosuke before, the other party said that it had been done long ago, as an old acquaintance, he knew clearly that it must be perfunctory, and those people who set up the plans were clearly rushed out on the spot during the phone call. Results.

"What do you mean the character design is not even completed? I started preparing it when you said you wanted me to draw a mystery comic. These parts have been completed a long time ago. It just depends on whether you want to serialize this work. I was worried and didn't want to add pressure to you, so I didn't take it out yet.

You know how efficient I am at work, Shimomura-san! "

Hojo Kyosuke said dissatisfied.

It turns out that this is indeed what Hojo-sensei would do. So gentle, you can feel his soft and delicate heart in every detail.

Tetsuya Shimomura remained indifferent and lowered his head to look at the comics.

Turning to the first page, well, it was indeed the high school student whose stunt the two had agreed upon last time was to lynch prisoners with a football.

The character modeling is completely different from Mr. Hojo's previous works. Whether it is "One Punch Man" or "Attack on Titan", unless it is a special character, the head-to-body ratio is basically in line with human common sense, but it will be slightly modified for aesthetic reasons. . Even the character picture I sent to me last time had a harmonious head-to-body ratio, but this time the original comic was modified according to my suggestions. The head became much larger, and it looked more like a Q version.

Oh, are you going to use a globe this time? If something made of that kind of material was used as a football and kicked towards the old man's head, would he still be alive? !

What is the opening chapter of "Detective Conan"? Most people probably only remember the classic roller coaster murder case. Then the male high school student Kudo Shinichi was dragged into an alley and given drugs, and was finally raped naked and confused. people discovered.

But there is actually a plot before the roller coaster, which is used to show the protagonist's reasoning ability and motor nerves.

A rich man held a banquet and invited a bunch of guests, including the man he wanted to kill. Therefore, the richer the people, the more they cherish their feathers. They are not even willing to hire murderers for fear of being caught, so they have to do everything by themselves.

The master performed a flying performance, and directly created a secret room that was not rigorous at all and shot the other party. He got rid of the suspicion by saying that his leg was injured and it was impossible for him to do such a thing.

Finally, when the police were at a loss, Kudo Shinichi appeared and directly said that the master was the murderer. That reasoning cannot be said to be magical, but it can only be said that Jesus Christ is no more than that. Not only did he directly reveal the master's criminal methods as if he was showing it to the criminal face to face, but he also knew that the master's leg had healed three months ago. So you really think that the patient's right to confidentiality is a decoration, right?

While the master was still stubbornly saying that his leg was injured, the famous detective Kudo Shinichi directly picked up the globe on the table next to him and smashed it. The master also dodged it swiftly as expected. It was just that Officer Megure had no idea, otherwise he would be sweating profusely when he saw the master's skills. At least Hojo Kyosuke felt that few of the people in his baseball team could escape.

Then when the old man wanted to escape, the famous football player sent the old man to the west with a globe. No, the uniform, just the uniform. If you want to know why he didn't die, it's the power of science!

This part of the original work only occupies a few pages, but these few pages have made Hojo Kyosuke sweat profusely when he recalled it.

This is completely rubbing the IQ of all mystery novels, mystery comics and mystery fans on the ground. No wonder this work has never been considered a mystery comic. No wonder the original Detective Conan is a work for children. This is really just right for children to watch.

Apart from other things, just the news that the old man's leg has been healed for three months, which at first glance does make the protagonist feel omniscient and omnipotent. It is amazing, but it has completely violated one of the creative principles of mystery works, that is, "detectives shall not solve cases based on clues that have not been hinted to readers in the novel."

Detective novels are not simply to show how powerful detectives are. Well, well, this is indeed at least the vast majority. But a large part of the fun is to let the readers get involved and solve the case together with the detective. Even if it is Sherlock Holmes, he will not solve the case out of thin air. The readers enjoy the hearty feeling of the moment when a series of clues are connected and the truth is revealed. It is not that the detective suddenly gets a "revelation" and directly identifies the murderer. What kind of reasoning is this!

Children will say that you are cheating after reading it. Why do you only know that his leg is healed? I don’t know. You are a reader and I am a reader, asshole!

He is at least a serious mystery novel writer. If this nonsensical plot is released, his reputation will be ruined. Even if it is explained that it is a work for young people, those readers who support his comics for "The Devotion of Suspect X" will probably immediately turn from fans to haters and write letters to scold him to death. The results of the questionnaire survey at that time should not be too ugly.

Although it is not shameful to eat, Hojo Kyosuke still has to have some face.

Based on this, although he always adheres to the original work's success, Hojo Kyosuke still made some changes, not too much, just some small details to show that the old man's legs are actually healed. It does not affect the overall plot, nor does it dilute the protagonist's strength, but the rationality is greatly enhanced.

As for the globe hitting the old man's head in the back, he did not change it. This cannot be changed. After that, there are countless occasions of lynching by the big-headed god of death, which can only be regarded as his characteristics.

"Too cheerful, it is completely unrecognizable that it is the work of Mr. Hojo."

Shimomura Tetsuya sighed. It was obviously the scene of the murder, and it was obviously a person who was not easy to mess with in black, but when the name of Kudo Shinichi was heard, the crowd and the black-clad people all started the star-chasing mode.

"Ah! Is he the famous high school detective Kudo Shinichi?"

"The savior of the neon police!"

"Look, it's Kudo Shinichi" the little girl screamed.

"Can I shake your hand?"

The headless corpse was still lying in the back, but everyone's eyes were focused on the protagonist.

"Although it's a bit outrageous, readers will really feel good, this feeling of being the center of attention." Shimomura Tetsuya nodded. As an editor, he should not focus on whether the plot is reasonable, but whether the comics are attractive. Interesting is the only truth!

"Hehe..."

Hojo Kyosuke laughed dryly. In fact, when he was drawing, his rigorous scientific thinking made him want to delete and modify it very much, but in the end he decided to trust Mr. Aoyama.

Shimomura Tetsuya continued to watch and quickly finished reading it once, but he didn't say anything, but immediately started to read it for the second time. He saw the problem at this glance.

"Hojo..." His voice was a little low.

"What, is there a problem?" Hojo Kyosuke was a little nervous. Although the other world has confirmed the invincibility of this work, it is possible that it will not adapt to the local environment. As the editor-in-chief of "Weekly Shonen High" for several years, Shimomura Tetsuya's vision is absolutely impeccable.

"This comic, was it just finished this morning?" Shimomura Tetsuya raised his head, his eyes full of confusion and disbelief.

"How is it possible? How can you draw so many in one morning? Don't be kidding."

Hojo Kyosuke denied that the manuscript he gave to Shimomura Tetsuya was the roller coaster murder case, the shrunken detective, the little pervert sneaking into the Mori family, and the kidnapped little girl Conan took the dog to find someone. It can be said that the overall appearance of this comic has been basically shown.

He also made a slight modification here, changing the plot of Conan riding a dog to a dog pulling a cart.

Riding a dog may seem like a comedy, but not only is it unscientific, it may also set a bad example for readers. If this comic can be successful, the number of readers will be very large in the future. It would be bad if there are children who see it and ride their own Wangjiang.

The body structure of dogs is not suitable for riding. The evolution of canine animals has determined that they cannot be used as mounts, even for children. So Hojo Kyosuke changed it to a dog-pulled sled, which is much more scientific. His hometown is Hokkaido. Do you know about dog sledding? Pulling a car is also possible.

It doesn't matter if someone follows suit like this, it can also enhance the relationship between the dog and its owner.

In short, how could it be possible to draw so much content in one morning! If this is admitted, there will be no reason to delay updates in the future! They will be treated like cows and horses!

"You guys, you still want to quibble, there is a time stamp here!!"

Tetsuya Shimomura raised the drawing in his hand and vigorously poked the corner of the page with his index finger, where the last revision date was clearly written.

Um... Hojo Kyousuke's expression was frozen.

This... must have been added by Shiyu-senpai because she is not familiar with the software?

He immediately thought of the reason. After all, both he and Eiri were used to delaying manuscripts. In order to cover up that they were rushing to finish the manuscript, they would never make such a low-level mistake, so it could only be Shiyu-senpai. , this was her first time participating in comic production, so it’s understandable that she didn’t pay attention to such details...

etc……

Something suddenly happened to Kyousuke Hojo. That guy at Kasumigaoka also had a habit of delaying manuscripts. Her editor-in-chief, Miss Machida, came to Ruyi's dormitory more than once to push for manuscripts. And although this guy always insisted that everything was going well, when Miss Machida rushed into the house, he acted like a pig who was not afraid of boiling water. He would not make a bunch of excuses to cover up his laziness like Erili did.

Therefore, it may not be that she didn't care about the timestamp, but that she was used to doing it.

"Look, I was typing obediently. I was still typing on the keyboard just before the deadline, so please spare me~~"

This is probably what it means. After all, Miss Machida has been taking care of Kasumigaoka-senpai since she was in junior high school. Even her nickname is "Little Shi", and she is completely playing the role of mother.

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