Chapter 252 The Third Round of Comments (1)

Including the final subtitles, the twenty-minute screening of the work ended, and there was no sound for a long time on and off the stage.

Until an audience member broke the silence with a deafening roar: "Yuan Xiao!! You have no heart!!!"

Then there was another sound.

"Luo Hanzhang! What a bastard!"

In fact, what I want to scold the most is the bastard father who blamed Qin Jue and deceived his son and daughter!

But that guy doesn’t even have a name!

I don’t even know how to scold him!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging!

To be fair, Qin Jue doesn't have many scenes, but the problem is that it's so cruel! It’s hard to let go of the abuse! Ling Chi felt like he wanted to hang the screenwriter upside down!

"Let's see."

Director Fang Youwen, the only director who had read the complete script, turned his head and looked at screenwriter Yuan Xiao who was smiling wryly beside him.

Few of the members of the fourth group knew the plot. At this time, all the women were defeated, including Lin Rou, and they were crying. The men also looked like they were going to eat Yuan Xiao, and some of them even shot angry looks at Yuan Xiao. Luo Hanzhang.

Actor Luo Hanzhang was about to cry: "Fathers and fellow villagers, it's none of my business!"

Conscience, when he got his part of the script, he just thought he was a handsome guy who was a little timid!

I didn’t expect Qin Jue’s plot to be like this!

Amid the curses from the audience, the fourth group came on stage one after another.

Suddenly, an extremely obvious roar came from the nearest auditorium: "Where are the eggs and rotten vegetable leaves! Which one is Luo Hanzhang?! Throw him away!!"

Actor Luo Hanzhang immediately took three steps back with weak legs, trembling and said, "Please don't bind the character to the actor!"

If I had known earlier, I would have asked the director to change the character’s name! Help!

Under the roar of laughter, the atmosphere finally eased, and the host Lin Yuqin also seized this opportunity and intervened appropriately.

"Alas." He started with a tactical sigh and said with a smile, "This work of yours..."

Dragon Kingdom has a grading system in the entertainment field, so it won't be rejected due to dark content. However, this fourth group of works is too depressing.

Although compared with "The Cage", the psychological depression is far less than Jiang Shuming's level, but the abuse in "Empty Monument" is straightforward and obvious, and the public can take a bite of the blade without much effort. No wonder it aroused public sentiment. Excited.

Fang Youwen kept a sweet smile and looked like he was just the director and had nothing to do with me.

Next to him, Yuan Xiao's face was frozen with laughter. Never before had so many viewers focused on him as the screenwriter at this moment all the way to the third round.

Wouldn’t you like to take a closer look at the actors?

Oh, actor Luo Hanzhang is not having a hard time either.

That's okay.

"A very realistic work." Yue Yang was the first to speak at the judges' table, "First of all, I want to say that you are very brave."

"The Empty Monument" is obviously a tragedy. The culprit, Lin's father, survived unharmed, but Nie Xingliang and Qin Jue passed away forever. Especially the latter, he was an injustice from beginning to end, and he was not punished until his death. Rehabilitate.

In the ending, Nie Xingliang has a tombstone without words, symbolizing his heroic and martyrdom achievements, but Qin Jue "doesn't even know where her ashes are." The tombstone that records her life and death is non-existent and empty. This is the real "Empty Monument".

Good people die, but bad people still live in the world. Such satirical works are rare in today's era. On the one hand, the main theme of promoting justice and goodness is on the one hand, but on the other hand, the audience is small. If the ending is bittersweet, it will still be Well, completely depressing social-oriented revenge works are difficult to get the support of a large number of viewers, and over time the number of people who create them will also decrease.

"There are still loopholes." Zhu Zishu, the only screenwriter among the four judges, smiled and added, "However, the flaws cannot hide the flaws."

"Indeed." Yue Yang nodded, "Is that Fang Youwen? I remember you."

Yue Yang commented on "The Invisible Lover" that he shot, "You also learned from "The Cage"."

The judges' vision is so vicious, not to mention that the detail processing in "Empty Monument" is also obvious. However, many interns and the audience did not notice it before Yue Yang pointed it out.

"Yes, teacher." Fang Youwen nodded honestly.

He made a magical modification here, adapting the two quick cuts in "The Cage" into the switching between Lin Rou singing and Nie Xingliang's sacrifice in "Empty Monument". The traces of imitation are slightly heavy, but because of Lin Rou's singing The action scenes with Nie Xingliang were very outstanding and directly attracted the audience's attention, so there was no direct association for a while.

"It was a relatively successful reference," Yue Yang said, "but the perspective transitions were used too many times, and I was tired of aesthetics by the end. In the end, Lin Rou's father, the murderer, appeared, which can't be regarded as a highlight."

Fang Youwen listened carefully.

"The camera shoots Lin Rou and Qin Jue from the perspective of 'Father Lin'. This little cleverness is used over and over again, which is very boring." Zeng Xinhuiqin did not show mercy because of the excellence of their work, "On the contrary, it exposed the fact that the crew was not good at acting. .”

Yue Yang laughed: "Yes, whether it is the two female students at the beginning or the two policemen at the end, there are too many roles and lines, and the distribution is unreasonable. Moreover, the acting skills are disconnected from the main and supporting roles, which is very distracting."

"Because of this, you deliberately made the actor who plays Lin Rou's father only appear on screen for a short time. The setting is very clever, but it is not enough to cover up the shortcomings."

Fang Youwen kept nodding, this was indeed the problem.

Yuan Xiao was so excited just writing this script. None of the actors are villains, so they can only choose among the extras. But if the extras can be so good, how can they be considered as extras? I just found a man with good lines but average acting skills to play Father Lin, and I had no choice but to use this method.

"It's quite scheming." Zeng Xinhuiqin snorted lightly, "Since the actor's performance is acceptable, we will use our strengths and avoid weaknesses to play a hat trick."

Fang Youwen could only laugh naively.

"Have fun." Zeng Xinhuiqin's eyes moved on the faces of the members of the fourth group in turn, and finally stopped near a few actors, "Here, half of your points come from the actors, and half of the remaining half To screenwriting and cinematography.”

She held up the score board that said 94.

"In terms of acting skills..." Queen Ruan Ziyan said softly, obviously very satisfied, "The performances of Qin Jue and Nie Xingliang are very good."

"In the play, the character 'Nie Xingliang' does not have major changes in expression. I am very happy to see the actor's handling of micro-expressions. A few smiles and a few eyes all represent different meanings. As for Qin Jue, he has fewer roles and highlights. It's quite satisfying, that part of the acting that turns from laughter to tears..."

Ruan Ziyan paused, looked at Qin Jie, and smiled.

"It's not at the textbook level, but it's more than enough for a teaching assistant level."

The rating is so high!

Lin Yuqin was just thinking about how to find a topic, and immediately answered with a smile on his face: "In the last movie "The Cage", our Qin Xiaolang still focused on acting. Unexpectedly, after a few months, our acting has also improved so much. ah!"

He didn't shy away from it and directly pronounced Qin Jue's nickname.