Chapter 388: Ambush Pen

For Xi Muhan, August is not perfect.

"The Lightest Language" signed a new contract with her and raised the manuscript fee again. "Girls' Century" was also responsible for the comic production of "Guotu · Cloud Country", but she still felt that this summer vacation was lacking.

With regrets, Xi Muhan took the high-speed rail and went to Yanjing to study in his last year of university.

Shen Xin also packed up her mood and prepared to draw the next manuscript.

The appearance of synthetic beasts really made Shen Xin very uncomfortable, but Aunt Niu's comics and the treatment of Nina in "Steel Refined Fa" went so far, using Scar Man Scar to kill Tucker and Nina.

The handling of "Steel Refining 03" is very depressing. Tucker and the synthetic beast did not die. When Edward visited the Fifth Research Institute, he met Tucker who appeared in the form of a synthetic beast again. In the end, Tucker used the Philosopher's Stone to refine Nina, who had only a body and no soul, and disappeared with her body.

If I knew this earlier, why did Tucker refine his daughter and Alexander?

Maybe it just confirms that sentence, some things will be cherished after they are lost?

However, I have to say that after the "Synthetic Beast" incident, "Smelting Steel" became better.

This kind of beauty is not only because of the fist-to-flesh fighting, but more importantly, the story and plot gradually unfold after that, and the artificial humans appear one by one, and the plot related to the Philosopher's Stone will also appear.

The readers of this world don't know Nina's tragedy yet.

Shen Xin's previous comics basically had no flaws, except that Zuo Wei's departure was more unacceptable, but now looking back at "Soul of Chess", Zuo Wei's departure has indeed improved the connotation of the entire comic.

After the publication of Chapter 7,

Readers thought it was still normal.

In order to recover their bodies as soon as possible, Edward and Al entrusted Colonel "Alchemist of Flame" Roy Mustang to help him find an alchemist who understands the formation of life, and Roy recommended Tucker.

Whether Xiu Tucker or the little girl Nina, their appearance did not cause much disturbance, but when Ye Hexu saw this page, he had a different state of mind.

"This is a bit unexpected." Ye Hexu scratched his head, let out a sound of surprise, turned his head excitedly, and looked at the assistant, "Have you watched the latest episode of "Smelting Steel"?"

"I saw it, but the ranking should be overwhelmed by "The Hunting Abyss". I feel that the recent episodes of "Steel Refining" are too dull. But the fights in the first few episodes are really powerful. I didn't expect Mr. Shen to draw fights so well. "

"Bland? That's why you don't understand." Ye Hexu sneered, "There was already a foreshadowing at the beginning of this story, but you didn't see it."

"Have it?"

The three assistants all looked at Ye Hexu in surprise.

"Look, on the fifth page of this story, it is said that Tucker has been refined into a synthetic beast. At that time, the synthetic beast only said one sentence, 'I want to die', and finally starved to death. A synthetic beast, why? You can talk, haven't you thought about it?" Ye Hexu asked back.

The assistant shook his head and looked at Ye Hexu curiously.

"I don't know, but I think there is a lot of information in this sentence... In short, let's read it slowly? I sometimes feel that the world of "Smelting Steel" is very similar to our real world. It is not the 18th and 19th centuries. It's now." Ye Hexu stretched his waist, "Alchemists have mastered some of the current science and technology by using formation formations."

Today's technology is also touching the field of "artificial organisms".

The assistants seemed to understand, but subconsciously looked at "Steel Refining".

Teacher Shen... really thought so much?

The minds of the three assistants were filled with question marks.

Tamagawa Haruka's studio.

"Okay, enter the strange world in the second chapter, defeat the opponent in the third chapter, and come out of the different world. In the fourth chapter, you didn't let other people enter the different world. This is handled very well."

Yan Fei saw the name of the fourth episode of "Game", and nodded repeatedly.

"I still have experience with this level of plot arrangement." Tamagawa Haruka scratched his head, "After the tense plot is over, it must be slowed down. First of all, in the first episode, someone is killed by the 'mastermind', and the atmosphere of the comic is serious. Get up. Afterwards, the protagonist and others entered another world, and it took two episodes to escape. Readers can take a breath, which should make readers relax."

"You're right, but it's not enough to put it in this sentence. If you draw it like this, this sentence will actually be wasted."

"Eh? Why?" Tamagawa Haruka looked confused.

"Because, this sentence has no impact on the following chapters. Have you read the latest chapter of "Steel Refining"?"

"Yeah. I read the Japanese version."

Because he doesn't understand Chinese, Ishizawa of "Youth Leap" deliberately took a photo of "Steel Refining" and sent it to him.

"This statement may seem ordinary, but it is actually foreshadowed."

"Huh? Is there?"

"Of course. Don't you wonder how that synthetic beast came about?"

"I don't know, it's not mentioned in the manga." Tamagawa shook his head.

"You're wrong, it's in the comics. Turn two pages later, and it will mention Tucker's wife who ran away from home..."

Yan Fei has read the following manuscript, so she knows the follow-up plot.

Looking back at the previous content in turn, she noticed those unknown details.

After being reminded by Yan Fei, Yu Chuanyao immediately understood, his eyes widened, his face was pale, and horror appeared on his face.

"Wait... Sister Yan, you mean, his wife... Tucker synthesized his wife with some kind of creature?"

Yan Fei nodded.

"This is so unbelievable. Is this still a manga of kings? This kind of method is more like a manga of evil ways..." Haruka Yuchuan said in surprise.

It is not by blood and sweat to attract readers, but by carefully crafted plots.

"That's why I said, if you want to compare "Game" with "Steel Refining", you must work hard on every detail."

Tamagawa Haruka looked nervous and bit her finger, "Then... tell me, after the protagonist returns, what else can these people do besides chatting and relaxing?"

"Foreshadowing." Yan Fei said patiently, "You can leave some clues in front of the plot that may be used later."

Haruka Yuchuan scratched his head, and after carefully looking at the setting and outline, he snapped his fingers and said excitedly, "Yes."

"Um?"

"Food... When people stay in a confined space, water and food are the most important. After completing the task, the player can get a certain amount of food. In the end, these people will definitely conflict because of the shortage of food ...I can plant the foreshadowing of food in the fourth chapter."

At the end, Tamagawa Haruka's eyes were bright, and joy climbed to the brows.

"Makes sense. However, you still overlooked a problem."

"Is there...?" Tamagawa Haruka was a little confused.

The corners of Yan Fei's mouth turned up slightly, "The people trapped here will die, and the food of the dead people will be taken by the survivors. This will create a possibility-the food of the survivors will increase. That is, Saying there's a 'shortage of food' may not be true."

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